Tony Stark!

[ChanceB]

Testing around again.

[Liquid]

hmmm try to stay away from having the head just floating there,
the effects on the right side look good the left could use some more blending, its
also very empty,i like the colors lighting , kiu

[Ascarine]

FHS 0o classic example of Floating Head Syndrome. Your tags should never just be a head unless the entire tag is the head from start to finish. An example of this is "ok" time is when the bottom of the tag might be the chin and the top being the hairline or top of the head with 80 - 90% being the head. When you just put in the head it looks a bit odd as Liquid said.

Effects arent bad but with room for improvement. I don't like the C4D work on the left side of the face. It's one of the reasons i don't personally used C4Ds cos I personally feel they intrude on the focal. Right side however isn't bad I kinda like it. Think the far left side needs filling as you never really want black empty space unless u can really pull the atomosphere off with the rest of the tag.

Keep it up though dude, only way of improving ^^