My 1st Spacescene

[Pleymo]

Yay!!
I finished my first spacescene
It's a bit plan at the top. But I really love it.
I think it's quitte good for my first space, what do you guys think?



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Full view pleas

[robgasm]

*commented on dA*

shudnt post outside links to dA.... tsk tsk..

[Psypher]

Overall, it looks good.

But the perspective on the planets 'rings' are off perspective-wise.


A damn good 1st Space Art, I must admit.

[Wizard2k]

i like it, but i agree with psypher about the rings

Wiz2k

[Pleymo]

Thanx ^_^
Here is an edit:
I changed the rings a bit, made a whole new planet(much more detailed)
I also deleted the comet.

Is this edit better or not?

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[Wizard2k]

i like the new planet.
i didn't see the comet before you told me about it..
the rings still don't seem to be right though...

Wiz2k

[Daemon_]

Why does all space are have to be sharp and rough. I like it but thats te problem. Rabies' space art is cool.

[gugge]

I couldnt see any problems with the rings...

[Illegalx17]

In the second one the rings and planet are grainy. In the first the planet is very nice, i think i liked thefirst better. The rings are a tad off, and taking the comet out was a good thing.

[Samuel]

You saved it as a GIF didnt you?? Should save it as a png.

I like it. Not much to say, its casual space art.