Anime LP

[Kinetics]

Okay, so here is a LP that i did this morning, i got the idea from another that i saw on Deviantart, it didnt come out as good as i wanted, but thats what CnC is for right?

[Kinetics]

Bump

[Reyn]

remove that white stripe going across

[NomNom]

id add another stock above the render set to screen or lighten...so itll blend ya know?

[Kinetics]

Thanks guys, anyone else?

[cC.ShorterGFX]

I think this has a lot of potential. You should remove the star stock or at least lower the opacity. Get rid of the pointless stripe :| it puts off the flow. Maybe have her on some ground? Add a shadow and see how it looks.
Keep working at it, good job.

[Kinetics]

will work on that later, but how would i put her on some ground?

[Manga]

Dude I really can't stand the way you are currently doing your lighting XD

[Kinetics]

Dude I really can't stand the way you are currently doing your lighting XD

Lol, i know, i just really liked the way that this dudes came out
http://signature-lab.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d3ekiop

[PrimarySleazy]

nice looks like v-13 from blazblue