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View Poll Results: Vote for best poetry

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  • Razer GFX

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  • DOMINO

    3 50.00%
  • Slave

    3 50.00%
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  1. #1
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    Default TPS #2 The Poetry Slam voting

    Thanks to all who entered. Theme was "you"
    No voting for yourself, most votes at end of poll wins.
    Winner will pick theme for next the next Slam


    Razer GFX



    Fuck My Life
    by: DOMINO

    I have small legs I have small arms
    My head is filled with Lucky Charms
    When all my friends have let me go
    They all will feel the pain I know
    Give me a reason to keep on living
    Find me an excuse to keep on giving
    My passion for life is never ending
    My vices are only smoking and spending
    I will never share my deepest fears
    The secrets that bring you to tears
    I feel my anger slipping through
    This poem is about me bitch not you
    I won't tell you how much I suck
    Cause you don't give a flying fuck
    If I don't rhyme then I don't care
    Just thought that I would share
    My life on paper doesn't impress
    My life's a mess no more no less
    Fuck my life




    The Inner Fight
    by: Slave

    I was told right from life, the moment I knew
    I would never amount to much, I would never pull through

    From here to then, locked in a basement with no sight
    That I would grow up one day and see the vision of light

    I was laughed at, made to feel shame for other peoples crimes
    I was told long before that these were cold and dark times

    No kiss on scrapped knees, no "I love you good night"s
    But this made me a good mother and gave me moral strife!

    I give gifts every day in hopes to prove my soul
    In every little way to make me feel whole

    Gifts of hugs, gifts of kisses, gifts of words to heal the heart
    Gifts to make me forget the begnning of my start

    This history isn't told for you to shed tears of sorrow
    This is to show that stronger I will grow tomorrow

    That you might fall in a stereotype bracket of loss
    Does not mean you should always count yourself cross

    Life is what you make it and will always stay true to your desire
    As long as continue to build your own empire

    The inner battle will be won once you fight back for a new life
    And reward yourself with feelings and friendships you know is right

    Blood and your beginnings does not make you who you are
    It's the person who stands today who has come this far.
    Last edited by cC.DOMINO™; 05-30-2011 at 05:43 AM.

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    I voted for Slave because was deeply beautiful and even though you weren't describing how you look physically, I have a pretty good idea at how you look on the inside. Good work Slave. I liked Razer's because that's something I would have came up with and I rapped Domino's like a white trash noob






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    White trash noob all the way, lol I was laughing after I wrote that, cause I sound depressed or suicidal in that poem, lol its not that hard to find something to rhyme with flying fuck.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DJFX View Post
    I voted for Slave because was deeply beautiful and even though you weren't describing how you look physically, I have a pretty good idea at how you look on the inside. Good work Slave. I liked Razer's because that's something I would have came up with and I rapped Domino's like a white trash noob
    Well I have been told I don't need a paper bag over my head to screw me xD
    Thanks for the vote.

    Domino this persona is so out of field for oyu, I totally like it, I would have never thought you had this feeling in you ^^

    I liked Razers but not the bg :S

    Radi's one of a kind gift <3

    ^My Wish List^




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    very nice from all participants, Domino gmv

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    it say's right at the top of the poll. "This poll will close on 05-23-2011 at 10:17 PM"

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    Slave really did it - she really told a story



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    Sudden death, poll closed so next vote wins. Slave 3 DOMINO 3

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