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  1. #1
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    Default Catch Your Breath

    A LP photo manip.



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    Last edited by Nairda88; 06-06-2011 at 01:22 PM.

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    <o> may i stop?
    good conncept needs a bit blending render looks not conected nut its an ok lp ^^
    and a bit more effects
    kiu

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    Thank you Toxic! I agree! I'm just stuck! hahaa I thought about adding some text but I don't want it to ruin the lp... Effects...? I'll play around a bit and see what comes out.

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    You need to focus on blending. That's key to a photo manipulation while probably also being the hardest part. Your blending on the birds and the feathers aren't too bad, but the woman (Your focal) has kind of a white line on her from the cut out. You should also try and match the colours and depth up as well as you can with her surroundings. The lighting is also vital for your blending. For example, the light source is behind the focal - so the shadow should be in front of the girl.
    Overall nice try, keep practicing.
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    Thank you Shorter! I took into what you guys said and I hope I improved it! I know it's still missing something but I can't figure it out! lol


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    Well that's a lot better, but now the sky looks as if it's in different segments. Kind of like a vector. So fix that and try work on the woman's back. It's blurred to much which is very distracting. Good job on the depth and colour correction though Now you could maybe start adding little details which are very important. For example, you could start adding things into the far background and blur them to increase depth and detail. Things like that.
    Good work.
    ~Deviantart~

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