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  1. #1
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    Default Soli's poem collection

    well here is my poem collection :s

    1-That I am here to stay
    I searched far and wide to find someone like you
    Someone whose words and actions are pure and surely true
    I went through rivers and forests, through cities and glens
    Before I found you, nothing would make sense

    Your downcast eyes and pursed smile
    Your heart you guarded well
    Since life has treated you like a ragged doll
    And sent you from Heaven to Hell

    The light inside you I want to make it
    Shine even more
    And then someday to me you'll open
    Your heart's door

    And every night I look at the stars
    And through the silver light I see
    What I long for, in my sleep I find
    I dream you are with me

    2-I wonder where are you now
    I feel that I have lost you and all I want is to have you back
    I wonder where you will be
    I will search for you and find you again one day

    Why did the time pass us by?
    Why did the gray cloud the sky?
    How come all that I've done to you
    Nothing of them seems so true

    Your hand in my hand and I feel like I'm dead
    The story begins right where it should end
    When will my darkness become your light?
    When will I kiss your fears goodbye?

    Why do I miss you when I didn't love you at all?
    How come this feeling made me curl up in a ball?
    Why do I the story ends before it began?
    And by idle chit-chatting we missed all the fun
    Why, this story just began....

    3-For now I have Returned
    do not be afraid
    come forth and step out of the darkness
    and lean on my shoulder once again
    do not be afraid
    don't linger the past
    now that I am here for you
    let me know when you are sad
    and I will make you glad
    that I am here to stay

    4-That we can reach what is untrue
    You promised me we would one day
    Fly together our kites
    Yet the stars are falling down on us
    And the clouds darken our skies

    You promised me one day you'd show me
    What I longed to see
    Yet our eyes are blinded
    Thus never we will be free

    You promised me that we can reach
    What is untrue
    A broken promise since
    I no longer have you

    well I need to find my others but these poems well were written to some one who no longer is mine

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    very good writing, each one is interesting to read, do you still write poetry?

  3. #3
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    sometimes less words work better... but the general flow is good.
    seems that you miss that person a lot.. some darkness in it as well..

    I for myself think that even in a relationship no-one "belongs" to the other and there should be enough room to "breeth" .... I hope you'll find what you're looking for some day..

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