Phobia :D

[Kinetics]

I made this for some dude named phobia on another site Tell me what you think, and be harsh with the CnC

[Image]

Looks crazy good, but the text looks plain and Paint-ish. Maybe make the text smaller? I love it, colors look amazing. Nice lighting.

[Kinetics]

Looks crazy good, but the text looks plain and Paint-ish. Maybe make the text smaller? I love it, colors look amazing. Nice lighting.

Thanks man, usually i have to wait like a week to get some CnC and i know the text looks plain, but i felt it worked, thanks though

[Kinetics]

Bump?

[Loroy]

Too much lighting in the two places, try bringing down the lights and spreading it through the whole piece.
I love the render blending

[Misery]

The lighting/screen layer or w/e you may have that is causing the lighting, lower it because too much of it makes it looks hard to view or pleasant to see. The text with the tag is horrendous, if you manage to blend that text in with a different and more stylish font. Then I'll give it a 10/10.

Try clipping mask that text with green C4D, good work and nice try, keep it up.
8/10

[Kinetics]

The lighting/screen layer or w/e you may have that is causing the lighting, lower it because too much of it makes it looks hard to view or pleasant to see. The text with the tag is horrendous, if you manage to blend that text in with a different and more stylish font. Then I'll give it a 10/10.

Try clipping mask that text with green C4D, good work and nice try, keep it up.
8/10

kk, thanks man, and your sig is absolutely amazing

[Loroy]

kk, thanks man, and your sig is absolutely amazing

-TO DO LIST-
Spread light through whole piece.
Replace or even remove the font
Add more Foreground effects.
Try implementing some Fractals.
Then you got yourself a good tag

[Kinetics]

-TO DO LIST-
Spread light through whole piece.
Replace or even remove the font
Add more Foreground effects.
Try implementing some Fractals.
Then you got yourself a good tag

Okay, will do this now