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    Default Nightsky Dance Before the Ocean

    Worked on this vector for awhile, it was supposed to be for a team battle but apparently those have themes sometimes and I wasn't paying attention. >.>








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    Very nice concept, Littlefeet but I think it could use some more detail and the lines could be a bit more smooth.
    I don't know whether or not you were going for the rough lines, but I think more smoother lines would look better.

    The detail on the hair is great, but I believe you should add something more to define the person there, it was a bit hard to determine the position of her at first.
    I just think it needs a bit more detail. Good job, kiu!






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    Kill the background and spam that hippie rainbow shit all over the place. Sex.


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    the girl vector concept and detail on the hair is awesome
    your background looks too simple for what you have created,
    also some of the liquify tool looks a tad oversharpened , fancier background please
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    I would agree, the bg in this feels as if it is just filler, not enough detail as you put into the focal. I would say put some thinner strips in there fading off the original colour it's sitting on top of .

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    Thanks for the comments guys =)

    I had planned to do more with the background but once I heard there was a theme (and it was not dancing flower dress girls) I just had to do some stars and move on :/

    Happy with what the parts I did spend time on though =D

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