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View Poll Results: Vote for best poetry

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  1. #1
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    Default The Poetry Slam #3 voting


    #1 Ripley

    The Yellow Haired Samurai

    A yellow haired warrior stands alone ‘neath the sun,
    The future uncertain, the past not undone.

    She casts her mind back to the day that she was a bride,
    The day her child should have lived and she should have died.

    Five faces responsible, they all did her wrong,
    Her anger is constant, her vengeance is strong.

    The sun starts to set and she thinks of the blood that’s been spilled,
    By her very own hand, two have been killed.

    The setting was beautiful, ‘neath the snow and the stars,
    Snowflakes turned red from the wounds now that are scars.

    Weapons were drawn and hell was unleashed,
    Her skill was unmatched, the target’s spirit released.

    The other was a mother, just as she could have been,
    But an eye for an eye, uforgiven, unseen.

    Two out of five, but there is still hate in her heart,
    The three that are left will soon play their part.

    She takes out her sword, the blade shining like gold,
    It was time to move on, the day growing old.

    The future is uncertain but her task will be done,
    The yellow haired samurai following the sun.


    #2 Slave

    Addictions
    By Slave

    You have an addiction that you can't let go
    I make this perdiction soon enough it'll show

    Change your ways, make a different face
    Eliminate the haze, create a new base

    It goes deeper then this,.. true not to make a diss
    You gatta get off the smack it's like a monkey on your back

    Watchin as you slippin and it ain't no surprise
    To see yourself sinning as your insides slowly dies

    I see you fallin, then you just let go
    Then you start balling that you can't say no

    Deceiving is the path that now your running with
    Vengeful is the wrath to life's precious gift.


    #3 Misery

    a diseased mind with an invetiable reaction,
    an empty cup of strife, a story filled with
    your imminent catalyst reaction


    #4 DOMINO

    The urgency of the matter requires attention
    Invaders have come from a different dimension
    Lost in the void of abnormal dillusion
    Searching for God with no absolution

    Nothing can stop the end of the world
    Devious plans have reluctantly unfurled
    A new world order is set into place
    Putting a name to this nameless face

    Past, present, and future have all alligned
    Our fate as human beings unwittingly signed
    Love of the unknown has driven our fear
    Will we ever know why we are here


    #5 littlefeet



    Last edited by cC.DOMINO™; 06-23-2011 at 08:12 PM.

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    Please read all entries before voting, no voting for yourself, and most votes when poll closes in 7 days wins. Good luck everyone.

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    5th got my vote really liked the poem, its awesome.

    Kiu guys <3






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    I think everyone who entered did a really good job being creative. I loved reading every entry cool stuff peeps, lot's of talent on this forum, and not just when it comes to pictures and paint <3

    Radi's one of a kind gift <3

    ^My Wish List^




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    definately better all around entries this time
    Last edited by cC.DOMINO™; 07-08-2011 at 02:40 AM.

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    I guess people on here don't like poetry >.<

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    buncha lazy bums, don't want to read more than 5 lines of text.

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    Congrats to littlefeet for winning TPS#3, and thanks to all who entered and voted.

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    Great job littlefeet i didnt vote in time but yours wouldve gotten my vote, everyone did great though

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    Thanks guys =D Not sure how much of a win it is with 2 votes, but I'll take it!

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