new...craptacula

[G..]

seen this kinda style but meh my attempt fails lol

[Studed]

Too dark.. :$

[ProStyle]

cant see sh*t

[Liquid]

i know what your going for and you have a good idea of it on v2
keep going but work on your lighting , keep shadows and illumination in mind ,
and try not to over saturate the sig

[G..]

thanks man ill work on those points in the next one

[ascheb]

its really dark... but I like the idea too... I prefer v2 but think the colors need more blending good job