This wasnt here before.....

[Imagine]

this wasnt here before lp:

orginal stock:

blah

[Gaaf]

Thaat is sweet!
I love the concept i love the feeling.
realy nice man.
not quite sure about the text but okay

[-V.]

I really like this one. The concept is really cool, execution is good to. Maybe a bit dark, but because i like dark that isnt a problem for me. Gj

[Imagine]

Thx guys and i thught text will help the Composition :P guess im wrong XD

[KidBuu]

IMHO, the original stock is better, that dark dull setting doesn't work with bright lights, or maybe if you played around with light painting, the light strokes would have overpowered the dullness, otherwise its way too dark. I think you wanted more contrast but in turn you decreased brightness and that screwed it up. I almost cant see any composition due to the darkness. Try something like this http://ryan0001.deviantart.com/art/L...0painting&qo=5 <-see how the stock is way dark if left alone but due to that light painting it looks greatly balanced.