Oddworld

[Theo626]

I was trying to work on my lighting, tell me what you think.

CnC please!

[Theo626]

anyone?

[Lewk]

left side needs sharpening.
the front of the rock second back right side (hope that makes sense)
should be darker.
Depth is okay.. lighting is a little off. But it looks good.

[Theo626]

Okay, I'll post a v2 when I get a chance. My power is out again, so Im on my mobile

[G..]

i think some more depth on this n it would be much better, also maybe a warm photofilter adjustment layer

[ascheb]

its fun to watch you get better you need some blending in this one... but lighting is working just pull our ur burn tool to add more depth and give more atmosphere to your lighting

[Theo626]

Thanks Ascheb! I'm having fun, just glad to be a part of a helpful community

[Gaaf]

The background stock looks reale lq man..
I dunno why u added the c4ds maybe as sun lines but the dont look to good in here
Try not to center your render, and add some depth by adding darker spots and blurry/sharp spots
I think you are improving, but im sure u can do better!

[Theo626]

Okay here is v2. I tried to do some grunge type effects on the background because the background got lq looking as the tag went on. This is going to be my last attempt on this tag, just because I have applied the image so many times it is hard to change. Please CnC!