Trying something new

[cC.Riqochaii]

Trying different techniques
CnC would be greatly appreciated

[littlefeet]

Good job riqo! I really like the colors you used and you did a good job with the depth. You were off to a good start with the pen lines,plus the flamingos on her shirt are cute =D

I'll try to give good cnc!

I think the two things you should focus on for getting better is lighting and direction. You have some blue and pink light objects around her but she is just in white light, try to get some blue light on her where it would be hitting on the left arm sleeve, right sleeve, and then pink on the right side of her face and upper chest. Also, for lighting, it will stand out a lot more if it isn't the same on both sides, so maybe darken the right side of the sig and where she seems to be looking could be brighter, that's where here face is, that's where you want attention focused.

The other thing is your effects, which should really go with the sig. Just like with your lighting, you don't want the same kind of effects on both sides like you have now. Try to make them go with your main object. So if she is going right in her direction, where she is looking and leaning, try to make the effects go in the same way, maybe move them out of the right side of the sig. Right now she is going right but you have lines going in two opposite directions, kind of pulling her apart and dividing attention.

Blah, I hope that helps >.<

Good job =)

[cC.Riqochaii]

Thanks alot I really appreciate it

I'll remember what you said about the lines going in the direction that she's looking it makes sense and adds flow

[ascheb]

well Little Feet pretty much said it all... I did notice though that for some of ur effects the edge of the stock is showing... like on her head u can see the sharp lines of the edge of the layer on Linear Dodge... always cool to try new things look forward to seeing more in this style from u

[Imagine]

great tag mate love the effects and the lightning if you look well the fractels really did maked the tag look clutterd except from that its cool imo
gj and kiu dude!