Color Clash v2

[InFRaH]

cnc

[Aether]

Cool concept, there's 2 characters but they work well as 1 focal due to them being positioned so close together. I dislike the fact you used copies of the focal as effects and allthough the whole 2 colours and characters clashing is a cool idea I think having only 2 colours looks a bit bland in this situation. Keep it up!

[InFRaH]

Cool concept, there's 2 characters but they work well as 1 focal due to them being positioned so close together. I dislike the fact you used copies of the focal as effects and allthough the whole 2 colours and characters clashing is a cool idea I think having only 2 colours looks a bit bland in this situation. Keep it up!

Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it

[cC.Riqochaii]

I think that you should add a fractal on the sword to show the sword clashing effect something like this http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs23/f/20..._by_Keablr.png

[ascheb]

i would smudge those dual extra two focals in the b/g... its hard enough to have 2 but to have four... it messes with ur compo... i like the smoothness =) I like what riqo said too... those two swords would look awesome clashing together KIU