Like it...?

[Chaos]

Lemme know what you think
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[Cyku]

Nice man the BG is awsome and it just looks well... great! ^^

[iceryu]

text needs work and blend the render alittle but the bg looks nice good job mate

[Chaos]

thanks any ideas on how to improve the text?

[iceryu]

maybe when ur doin ur text you could set it to smooth

[Chaos]

I blended the render. didnt know what to do with the text though..
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[Samuel]

Try just using a plain pixel font. Should have made this a bit smaller. To much blank bg. Good work tho =D

[Roy]

Looks good man...Except I would take out the little bubble looking things.