Cnc please

[assyrianlegend]

Hey guys, just want to know what i could have done to make this sig better... any CNC is welcome.
BTW am new to the whole "smudging" and "c4d" use tried to use some a little in this not sure how i did.. the left hand side is smudged and does little lines of green and stuff are some c4d's.

[cC.Remember♥Me]

remove the text and tone down the contrast ;D

[assyrianlegend]

How do you think i did on this one? tried to lower contrast..

[Gaaf]

As said before its to dark, try to bright up some of the black spots.
Í would advice to remove the border and the text..
I like the colors, but i think the render is to big maybe size him down a little?
Just follow some tuts in smudging and c4d placement and u will get there

[damien]

First one waaaay overcontrasted and I'm not a fan of headshots for renders. The second one is better, but it all feels too dark.

[Allseeyineye]

they are weird sized man, way too wide

as everyone said, the first piece is overcontrasted, and the render is too big (and therefore not really blended)
The second one is better (still wide, but much better) the contrast is good, the render is smaller (and blended), but is it me, or is it kinnda Lq?

I think there's already a nice improvement between these 2 taggs, keep it up, and you''l be fine