has frozen me forever

[Garis]

Finally I came up with something I quite like.
What do you guys think about this one?

[wrftw]

i dislike the left part a lot. if you smudged it, or just an empty block, idk. really sweet tag though

[Xelo]

as wr said left side distracts, also I am not a fan off dup focals and scanlines.
other then that very nice!!

[Garis]

V2?

[Provided]

Prefer v1 even though it's distracting.

[Manga]

Same. V1 was better imo.

[Garis]

God damnit!!
So. pro-photoshopers, any real ideas how to improve this?
You just saying it suck, but don't give any suggestions.
Not argumenting your point sucks.

[Lewk]

Make it taller so you see more of her face. Its the composition thats killing it. Thats all

[+s9.Oath]

i hate tags with the dup face stuff but in this case i really like it lol i think the text works great and also i think maybe add some more detail to the bg on the left side it looks like of erased or like you forget to do something to it overall a great tag man glad to see ya makin stuff again

[Manga]

I don't suggest making it taller, would prob mess with your effects and shit, assuming this isn't cropped.