Girl Tag

[KroniiK]

I think i love this render too much lol :P

[Nemesiscl]

To much empty space on the left side of the tag and the focal is to small. It's lacking in depth so work on that and your text.

[Slave]

See you have some good texture going on, and I think it would look fantastic if you just spent more time with this tag.

I agree with what was said above me, it's kind of empty, the tag/focal is very small, but becuase of her cropped looking hair I think making her larger would show up the crop hair too much. I also think because this tag is so small you should drop the 1px black and white boarder around it. Boarders tend to go through fads, but in small tag cases it's usually a big no-no also to have two diff colour boarders also tends to be a no-no esp with something so small.

I would suggest something like a field behind her or something that can at least show that their is depth. Use your texture in places, found in the stock and if you really want to go far draw in some of her hair so it doesn't look so cropped.

Kepp at it . I would suggest to you though to look up some tuts more fixated around your own personal taste and look up some textured type tuts that will better help you make choices for b/g and foreground and stuff
GL ^^

[KroniiK]

alright thanks