samus aran

[Annokill]

Whats up

i made a new LP ( after following some tuts and some experimenting )

so here it is:

[Fork]

A little big to be a tag.

[Annokill]

well its a LP

[Fork]

Well this is the tag section, but anyways the black and white doesn't suit it very well, it's over contrasted, flat, looks low quality, effects are messy and the text kind of kills it.

[Annokill]

euhm lol

thats the style

its meant to be that way

[Fork]

It's meant to look bad? No offense but I'd suggest reading up on more tuts man I get what you wanted to do but could have been executed better.

[Lewk]

It's meant to look bad? No offense

If you're gonna say its shit, dont apologize. Like this:

It looks horrible.
you have at most 5 values. There is no depth and the focal looks more like the white explosion than the robot chick with a big gun. Which Im guessing isnt the way its meant to be.
You've over contrasted. FFFFFF on 000000 looks really bad. Its too strong and hurts the eyes.
The Focal isnt screaming. LOOK AT ME! If anything, its saying help me, Im getting drowned out by white.
B+W sigs are hard to pull off. especially when theres little gray to blend it.

[Annokill]

Ok ill dont make it a B & W

Ill delete the gradient map

And ill post i here with some improvements i hope