My First Photoshop Painting Of A Person!

[Hobbit]

self explainable, its my first photoshop painting! i'd like as much criticism as i can get really and constructive tips for more realism ?

I'm only half way through but some of you can tell where i'm going with it and can help me out i'm sure

[Slave]

More talent then me xD I think you gave her neck really good detail as well as her nose, though I think her shoulders are off a tad as well as the back of her head with it's hair doesn't look like it is pulled back, kinda just looks spike more like, you get me ?>.<

Keep at it man

[Lewk]

proportions are off...
My tip for this is.
set guides at 33% and 66% horizontally, same vertically, on your source and on your actual canvas..
Then draw each box seperately in rough to get an idea of shape.
Then go over it again neater.

[Linda]

give some shadows on her face, more glow in the eyes, maybe eyelashes,so eye would stand out. PM me, i saw very good people face tut in DA! ;]

[oNo]

She needs bigger hair, i think it would make it look a lot more natural.

[Fork]

Her hair needs more depth, also she needs more detail all over but like you said it's only half way done.

[Glados]

Proportions definitely.

When I first looked at it though my eyes went right for the extremely large ear. Maybe it's just me but maybe that's a bit too big xD

[UriahGFX]

Great detail

Add more hair on the top of her head, looks really flat.

[Hobbit]

its cuz i tried to add a plug in her ear aha ! and thanks guys, i'll take in your crits, proportion / hair etc, i was trying to make the image her laying down too if you get me? so once I add background, pillow etc it might make it look more natural, but thanks alot guys

[wrftw]

also work on color transition