Trying render stuff.

[Pingu Stifler]

[JoShO]

There would be a lot more potential if the two massive white brushes on the top right and bottom left weren't used, as they're the beginner level way of adding light, if you added some proper lighting in there it would look a lot better.

I like it so far though, keep it up

[Pingu Stifler]

thanks man, i added those two to make it look beautiful in my eyes

[Slave]

I feel pingu that if your render was more sharpened that this might give it more potential, it's a lovely tag and the blending is really ogod, but imo you girl is a little lost in the haze ^^

love the colours also

[+Nyaa]

Yeah it looks a little bland, try sharpening the girl mainly, blurring the edges of her hair (especially the gaps) and sharpen some bits of the BG. I see a bit of scan lines there as well, and personally I think it would look better if you got rid of those, burn&dodged some areas of the BG and removed one of the light splotches.

Careful not to sharpen too much though, if I'm trying to make minor adjustments I use the smart sharpen filter

[Pingu Stifler]

thanks for the advice guys