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[twohigh]

hey guys i'd appreciate some cnc on my entry for the sotw, grats to oNo for winning and thank you to everyone that voted. i am using the sig now so stop looking for it if you started. also thx to slavory for releasing his model render pack that i used to make the tag.

[cs4pro]

I like it man.
Just think the sharp c4d on the left side of the focal
looks a bit weird cause you cut it straight vertical.
It doesn't blend that way....you should try to make a soft
transition between that c4d and the background c4d's.

The focal looks pretty cool, also liking the lightning from the right side.
I'd just darken the background on the left side a bit more.
Also you overblurred your Background on the left side imo.
B&W is really fitting the tag, depht is pretty cool (just the overblurred part needs some work)

Overall pretty cool tag dude!
Keep it up!

[BakaArts]

well cs4 already covered the stuff XD
Nice tag overall and nice use of the render

[twohigh]

lol i think you're seeing the left side a bit differently then it was supposed to look. the left c4d was basically put there to create some more depth.. its blurred on the far left, because i tried to make it seem like it was closer to the viewer and it was out of the line of sight, therefore leaving it out of focus. i failed with the attempted effect. :P thank you for the comments, i may make a v2 of it.. i feel it can look much better.

[SparryGfx]

i love it man looks good

[twohigh]

thanks :]