After some practice

[Necrothalass]

Here is what i got.
http://youtu.be/5mN3Ky7GQAs

[Fork]

You're still doing it wrong.

[ColdDegree]

uh it was pretty good til about like 30secs then it got kinda >.> iffy

[cC.DOMINO™]

Is it a good sign that my ears are bleeding? lol jk it's getting better, just gotta find that hook that soothes and appeals to all.

[Distello]

You've certainly got the right sounds in there.
Im not too into dubstep but It sounds a little... crazy, if you could give it a good sturdy background beat everything else should fit in nicely.
Throw in a couple of build ups there too, that synth deserves a good climb before the drop.

Edit: Out of interest, what are you using? Both hardware and software.
I'm kinda building up my own music studio slowly. Thinking about forking out for a Virus TI2 Polar and a few other things.
Please don't say Sylnth1 or Nexus =P

[Necrothalass]

You've certainly got the right sounds in there.
Im not too into dubstep but It sounds a little... crazy, if you could give it a good sturdy background beat everything else should fit in nicely.
Throw in a couple of build ups there too, that synth deserves a good climb before the drop.

Edit: Out of interest, what are you using? Both hardware and software.
I'm kinda building up my own music studio slowly. Thinking about forking out for a Virus TI2 Polar and a few other things.
Please don't say Sylnth1 or Nexus =P

just fl studio, can't really afford midis and don't really wanna buy any until I know I'm capable of making good electronic music but yeah I think I.should've added a lot more effort.I got some synth samples and trying them out