Gaze

[ChanceB]

Flow could be better. Still trying to work on smudging. Thoughts?

[twohigh]

too empty on the left, lose the borders.. unfinished IMO

[Xelo]

the border distracts...
rules on borders are simple... either add a white or a black one.... if it doesn't work... leave it out!!
other then that? hmmm maybe tone down the white on his face just a bit and you've got a sexy tag!!
me likez!!