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  1. #1
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    Default Constructive Crit Please

    Tried adding some lighting effects etc to this stock image:




    This is the final result:



    It seems that the lighting doesn't exactly match up :/ Perhaps you guys can tell me what looks wrong etc

    Thanks


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    the lines are all going in front of him.... they should go around him in my opinion... just erase some of the lines making it look like it goes behind him and comes back on the other side...... that would make it better 3 D... very nice colors!! nice compo!!... maybe his torso should glow a bit on the frontside too?? it looks like it is only gloing from the back now..

    pretty impressive so far!!!


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    Thanks man Will work on it


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    not too bad job of rendering the guy out, but the lighting effects need some work, as said above the effects need to blend a little better in with the piece, found this tut that might help you achieve what you are goin for here

    http://www.psdbox.com/tutorials/show...-art-tutorial/ hope that helps, show a v2 if you do more to it GL

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    A low-rez picture with hi-rez effects always looks off for me. I recommend using a higher quality image next time, and it will look much better. Other than that, I like it.

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