Chargin' Up

[twohigh]

This believe it or not took close to 3hrs.. let me know which version u prefer, what to work and so on. still suck :S



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any more suggestions?

[twohigh]

bump for some cnc

[Allseeyineye]

Focal is good, but the nebula/fractal/c4d effect on his arm doesn't work
try making the edges a tad darker
BG is good, but a littlebit overblurred
and the low opacity or sreen effects in the right lower corner aren't really nice

Kiu, nice one

[twohigh]

haha yeah, my laptop screen is broken so what i see on my tv doesn't necessarily come out on the comp.. lol about the edges, I was burning em, and on my TV screen they showed up to dark. now its opposite haha. i see what u mean bout teh nebula . and about the right hand corner yeh effect render set to screen , will make my changes when i get home. anything else?

[twohigh]

bump for more cnc, updated with new version

[Fork]

Nice concept, bad execution.

[Kinetics]

agree with fork, need to work on your BG alot, but its decent

[sirenzo]

its a really nice concept m8 and colors , but it looks really lq. and poor lighting. als sry had to add this in but u also could use some depth m8 . really flat and boring.

[twohigh]

thank you for the comments guys,back to the drawing boards. :]

[wrftw]

crop it to a tag add contrast