First signature on here... Yellow eyes

[YellowDzn]

Hey guys, This took about 45 mins. The pixels were being stubborn... :P

[Slave]

Like the yellow on speia, but the random right splatter of yellow is out of place, unless you intend to go more with the yellow I suggest you stick with the more simpler look and get rid of it.

The yellow tear droop is a nice effect, I think the eyes themselves coud use some work tho....

I danno what it looked like before you played with it, but it doesn't look low quality, yet the yellow in the eyes does.
What I usually do is I go with the original, make a new layer paint it grey, then use the burn and dodge tool in the areas I feel could have a more dramatic look.
Then I make a new layer and using a ( in this case) yellow i circle around the eyes, then I go in one more layer and make a lighter or darker yellow getting closer to the center, then I use a clip mask of colour balance or something like thta to play around with the yellow till I get my desired effect.

Here is a link to one of my works where I did what I just suggested to you
http://elleaeve.deviantart.com/galle...et=24#/d392y5j

Hope I gave you some insight

[Xelo]

still for a first sig, this is pretty neat!! but yeah Slave is right of coarse.

XL

[YellowDzn]

That splatter is sort of my watermark. But I will take all the things you said into consideration. Thank you!