Okay, I'm on my laptop here so I might not be seeing what you actually have, but I'll give it a shot.
Your text is interesting, but I think its on the bigish side. To I feel you found a great place for it.
You seem to have a filter or gradient on here tho that drags your colours down and makes this a more monotone image, I would suggest going back and taking it off and trying some more softer colours with your filter/gradient.
Also your light source is a tad off, there is two light sources on your focal, eitehr get rid of them and fix your focals lighting, or get rid of your current lighting and match up the current lights ( much easier) As I can see it there is on coming from low left onto her face and mid right falling onto the side of the gun.
Overall, I feel you are heading on the right track trying to add the "proper" elements to you tag, you just need to hone in on these skills a little more
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