DEUS EX | ALSO A GIFT FOR DISTELO

[Annokill]

Hey guys i did quite sometime on this
i experimented w/ stuff ( not all seen on the outcome ) thats why it took a while
i hope you guys like it.
BTW its also a gift to Distelo, because he's often online and fun to talk w/.

[.Void]

Great concept but I don't like your end result.

[Distello]

Thanks man, I love it!

[cC.DOMINO™]

a tad bit blurry but nice job, Distello doesn't deserve gifts tho.

[Distello]

a tad bit blurry but nice job, Distello doesn't deserve gifts tho.

Well I did buy you a flower-power apron for your womanly baking business, but now you can just forget it!

[Impasse]

Your depth of field is really off, Your whole piece lacks any real contrasting elements and your lines going across your xray area look to be aliasing a little bit. That being said Here is what I suggest. Try it without the blur you have entirely. If you REALLY want to use it do so very sparingly. Your piece is so similar in color that it will rely on the sharpness to add the contrast. Also you should never include your typography in your blur range. That defeats the purpose of having it there entirely. Props for the 3d text though it has potential. This whole piece has potential in fact. You may try to use more of a color range, when I do things I like to keep my color count low but I find good contrasting colors to separate the main elements. Also one thing that I noticed is around the midsection of your piece you have what looks to be curved lines very vaguely visible. I think you should either remove those or make them more prominent because it causes a distraction. You have a good concept though and that goes a really long way so keep it up I chose this to be the first piece I critiqued on this site because I liked your idea and I think with a bit of work it could be really great.

[Annokill]

Okay thanx a lot a lot a lot, ill work on it today, make a copy then delete all my filters and start ove w/ things that are blurred. Ill do some w/ the text, but i think i have a problem cus i used the blur tool so yeah. Ill just remake eerything except his body and the text, the x-ray costs some time hah.