My first Sig

[OGbyDesign]

I know that its bad, so criticism and advice are both welcome.

[exclusive]

for a sig it's a bit big but yeah size is something you can change, for the sig:

i think you should read the rule of third(wikipedia)
and try to make te c4d's match with the render like colors, dark/bright and stuff like that

[OGbyDesign]

thanks! I'll work on it

[OGbyDesign]

Is this any better??

[Distello]

Well, first things first - its your first sig so CONGRATULATIONS!
and welcome to world of pain and misery that will suck your life dry like a leach stuck to your nob sucks the semen out of your ballsack.

But thats enough of that, for a first sig its not bad, not bad at all. Considering one of my first tags consisted of a badly blended M4 render and a C4D that I didn't know how to use so just dragged it in - black background n' all. As said above the sizing is a little on the big side, although they tend not to have a strict size limit its best to keep it within 500x500.
Work on the C4D in the background, Its a little transparent most likely due to blending - I would advise downloading the entire C4D render that way you don't need to play about with making it look right.
Also try not to work too much over the top of focal.

Keep going man!

[ShakeGraphics]

Congrats on the first time sig! it definitely is not bad for a first, id be lying if i said my first signature was good lol(not that my signatures are all that good to begin with). but i recommend starting out making signatures that follow a theme with colors that match the render and especially with the c4ds try and smudge or blend and also use color overlays on them or gradient overlays so you can make them colors that blend/contrast the render to give it some sort of direction or flow.

[OGbyDesign]

thanks for all the advice everyone!!! I'll keep working at it!

[BuBBlez]

You can look at PSDs if you want to improve. Also, download some resources from this site, they offer a lot and their really helpful.

[ShakeGraphics]

You can look at PSDs if you want to improve. Also, download some resources from this site, they offer a lot and their really helpful.

Yeah, i agree with bubblez 100% try and get as much resources as possible so the possibilities for your creativity are innumerable and download the psds that are in the resource section they show full sigs so you can get ideas and such!