Ironman

[Daogin]

Newest, feel free to tear it apart with CnC





2nd version, I tried adding more depth, through in 2 different FX tried not to go overboard but idk, so let me know. I aint that good at using burn and dodge and same with blur and sharpen

[cs4pro]

Look pretty cool if you ask me!
I'm really liking the effects you've created.
Also the colors are really nice and fitting the render perfectly.

I just think the depht could be improved a lot.
The effects in the background and forgeground are too blurred in my opninion.
Blurring some of the background effects adds some depht but blurring almost all of the effects kinda doesn't work here.
I would like to see some of the effects more sharpened. This would improve the depht and it will also show more detail.
Cause I think the effects are really cool I would like to see some more detail in them.

Maybe you can also work some more with the burn and dodge tool to create some better lightning.
I would like to see some more contrast in the render. Like darken the edges some so it blends more in with the background.

But ohter then that the sig looks nice!
Keept it up!

[Daogin]

Awesome feedback I will most certainly go back and try to fix it up more see what I can do with it, thank you

[Derosion]

Needs more foreground fx.

[Daogin]

updated

[Ma12auder]

Good work overall!