Huston, ive run out of beer

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[OGbyDesign]

Houston* Just saying.. Good job otherwise though

[Quickshot17]

oh true thanks ill have to fix that

[+s9.Oath]

i think apathy and DM would like this i like the idea behind it tho

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thanks guys

[Allseeyineye]

I like the idea very much
really creative and original

The execution however, isn't what it could be.
I don't like the huge-ass text. Try searching for text tutorials, for example on deviantart.com. Try making the text more subtle

Also, The c4d's don't seem to fit. Maybe you could make it a bit more manip style. Replace the c4d's with effects
Work on little details, like the reflection in his helmet: make sure the reflection matches the surroundings

I like the concept, the tips are mostly suggestions

KIU, I like the creativity

[Dark Method]

Well...in a gfx sense, I like it. Other than that, the whole idea behind it really bothers me.