First sig after 3 year break. Thoughts?

[lodimas]

Hey folks! So i've taken a break from the whole sig/manip thing for about 3 years. If you could throw me a bit of cnc on this that would be nice, i know there's some big issues with it but photoshop did crash half way through and trying to re-create something is always a pain for me. And the text is awful but i wasn't so enthused about it anyway. Hopefully i can get some more practice in and get back into this!
Cheers
Lod

[!!!~GHOST~!!!]

looks nice but doesn't look complete. try adding some kind of lighting effect or fractal to the background.

[sirenzo]

should never put your focal in the middel of your tag rules of the third . looks better if it was a bit to the right or the left, and some lighting would be good and maybe add in some special effects , looks like u did a little bit of smuddging keep messing witht hat and give it flow . colors are good . quality is a bit low . kiu

[Distello]

should never put your focal in the middel of your tag rules of the third . looks better if it was a bit to the right or the left, and some lighting would be good and maybe add in some special effects , looks like u did a little bit of smuddging keep messing witht hat and give it flow . colors are good . quality is a bit low . kiu

The rule of thirds is the biggest load of bull. Plus it mostly applies to photography.