C4D | Strike arts intro.

[STRiiK3R]

Not sure where else to put this, but i'd like to share this video in hopes of ideas of improvement.



Not going to ask for the usual "Comment, Rate and subscribe shit" I'm not a whore.

[Synsational]

In my opinion (which would be just my liking, someone else might like something else) I think if you speed it up about two more times and cut to the chase as quick as possible then it'll look a lot better.

Also using colors that match makes it easier and nicer to look at, though green and grey match it's almost as overused as red and black. GL

[STRiiK3R]

In my opinion (which would be just my liking, someone else might like something else) I think if you speed it up about two more times and cut to the chase as quick as possible then it'll look a lot better.

Also using colors that match makes it easier and nicer to look at, though green and grey match it's almost as overused as red and black. GL

Thats some good advice, ill keep it in mind next time i need to create one.

[+s9.Oath]

i like it man umm i wish the text wasnt floating and maybe have the text come in alittle different cause it just fades out by particals and its just there when it starts overall its nice man keep workin