My second creation this week

[Hacio]

Hey guys, I made another sig this week.
Originally it was twice as big, but that was for the video.
Here it is:
~With text~



~Without text~



If you want to see how I made this here's the video:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eBSOagp99uE


I would like to get some critics and thoughts about it.
Thanks for checking this thread.

[.Void]

Blend it better, your effects and render stick out a bit too much.

[Maruk]

I think it looks pretty good mate, a bit more work on colors would be good (and will help you with the blending as well)

[xSiteWhite]

Looks nice but the green text is really hard to read and to small IMO

[Hacio]

Thanks guys for replying.