First Vector!

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

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new edits...
I DARE YOU TO COMMENT


But really guys... no one ever comments on anything anymore If you don't comment on mine go comment on someone else's!!

Sup guys! I just finished up my first vector for this graphic design class i'm in. CNC... But really because i'm getting a grade on this on friday... so really... Also i'm doing between 5 and 8 more versions, each with different levels of detail and stuff... i'm working on just a black and white one right now. so yeah comment and critique!





update: here's what's new! It's due tomorrow so :P

[Hagen]

Overall good, you got the basic shapes that portray lighting and overall allows the eye to tell what it is. I would say more detail to hint at the texture and just to give the eye something more to look at but you already said you are doing tjat. I would play with the background and make the colors pop a bit as well.

[cC.ZaMa]

Looks pretty good but I feel the top black part is a bit too 'choppy', maybe redo it to make it look smoother? That's my only complaint, gl on it ^^.

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

thanks guys! I'm not really allowed to mess with the background, although i am adding some graphics to make it look like sound is coming out (they're like little bubbles instead of the classic sound waves which i hate...)

and yeah the top is kinda choppy. it's hard because it's padded there and the padding was lumpy but i might try to redefine that area so you can pick up on the fact that there is padding there.

[Pet]

I dare to comment!


I like how it looks. It is nice and simple, but I would suggest you rethink the black on the underside of the band. It looks like it should be the shadow of the band lying flat against a surface, but the lack of shadows on any other part make me rethink it.

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

thanks nathan

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

heyyo posted some updates, check them out!!!

[cC.ZaMa]

I love the new updates ^^ nice job

[Hagen]

I like the bubbly one best! The textured one I think looks more complete with the addition of the dotted lines but I dont like the contrast on with the ear cups. The black/white noise or dots. I think it would without a drastic change in color from the background to the dots, like white/gray or charcoal/black. I like the diagnol lines alot though.

[Pet]

Of your 3 updated versions, I love the first one the most. I like how you played with both fill and line styles to give both light/shadow and texture.

The second is nice. It's clean and ultra contrast, not much to say about it.

As for the third, I like the idea, and intent behind the bubbles, but in all honesty, they just remind me of every picture someone slaps some circles on and calls it a vector. Those circle styles have been over used and it drags the rest of it down.


Sorry that this all comes too late, but I have no internet at my place so I have to go out to a coffee shop and bum their net.