DREAM musix ReaLity

[DREAM ReaLitY]

took me at least 5 maybe 6 hours straight to finish. I haven't slept all the night before so im pretty sleep deprived. sometimes I do better with less sleep cuz my thoughts are more...a typical haha.. and i sometimes use other sources of inspiration if im determined

Well im just getting back into graphic design in full force so please any advice, constructive criticism, or even how to get more people to view my work at least...

any help will be respected and appreciated. Thank you in advance.

Oh first of all I do not take credit for rendering the two women. This is an expression of myself and the inspiration music gives me. SO this is a piece that shows how music can take you to a better place :T

[Narwhal]

Hey, this looks really nice

gj man.

[Xelo]

loose the text. it doesn't fit there and if you use text make shure it blends nicely.
the white stands out way to much and takes away from the piece.

XL

[ColdCut]

Agreed about the text but also the fx are messy and they dont really blend well,i think you went a little OTT with the liquify tool,i think if you found some decent c4d's it would look a lot nicer but keep at it.