Whatever.....

[Nexoon]

i dont even know i think i did kinda gud on this one

atleast finnaly remembered to blend the render in with the bg

I was cheap and used to filter to edit it seems okk....

[Mega]

text is a nono the lines on the right look lq and the blending on the render dont match the colours in the bg the flow isnt sort of working , check some tuts or some other signature on the forum for inspiration , i can give u a psd if u want to learn off it
hold on ima bout to do an apabomb
gjm8kiu

[Mega]

i pm'ed u a psd of mine

[[system]]

Liek what filter did you apply to get the secondary effect? I agree with Mega, the biggest distraction is the text.

Other than that, it looks pretty decent to me... after a second look I definitely love the 2nd one.

[Mega]

maybe a bit too much filter use cant see any details maybe read some tuts in the tutorial section but nothing to worry about cos i was like you too :L just keep at it bro