SotW entry

[Remedy]

Entry for sotw here http://www.neoseeker.com/forums/34/t...week-v9/22.htm

[[system]]

I'm diggin it, but you're not really letting your focal pop.

I see what you're doing and I like the distractions, but I feel you should blend them in a little more, chop the edges, and square up the lighting. Give it a shine, moar topaz

[Remedy]

Had the same feedback earlier with a few people. Was also suggested to bring out a light source. I'll work on the focal a bit further.

Thanks system!

[.Void]

Messy
not blended very well with bg
text not so great
head a bit too sharp

[Remedy]

Any actual suggestions on how to improve other than calling out its faults? I love criticism, but it seems like you're a born perfectionist with the shortcomings of the actual suggestions.