rmm this needs some work imo.
flow goes all over the place, it looks lq due to over saturation, bg has hor and vert lines that don't fit, needs proper lightning and depth.
I do like the smudging at places tho. :-)
This is in my opinion good stuff Remedy, the best one I've seen from you.
I adore the colorscheme and the flow goes very well with both their poses and the history these brothers have together.
My two suggestions are following:
Change the fonts to ones that are cleaner, clearer and easier to read. That's a good guideline for all text on graphics, especially such small pieces as tags.
The top right C4D stands out from the rest of the effects in a negative way. Paint over it or swap it to match the rest of the smooth paint looking effects.
Yeah, the typography just doesn't sit right. I'm not the best at picking the right font. Oh, no C4D in this one but I completely understand what you mean. I'll fix that later tomorrow. Thanks again!
Itachi & Sasuke
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