background and render look ok, but the font and the stlye looks weird, try to maybe put the smaller text as sub-text because it looks weird and it's diagonal and looks strange straighten it up "bruva" hehe :P nice one it has potential for a first one in a long time it's good
The font looks okay to me, nice border as well. Though this is jus my opinion the space right below the font that is near the girl seems like you could add more to it, but like I said thats just my opinion. Overall, Good Job.
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