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[undertone]

its supposed to be a 24foot tall turtle for some project of sorts im working on.

still a WIP i guess, i feel i could do alot more with it.

any comments, suggestions?

[MartinBabies]

Well, first of all, real turtles don't have that kind of legs. They can't stand like that. :P Try harder shading and highlighting, instead of so blurry/smooth. You could also try to make the shadow in a darker color. Some shadow under the turtle would also be good.

Keep on working, will be fun to see the end result.

[undertone]

oh i know turtles dont really have legs like that, i used to have a couple, this is just a kind of cartoony 24 foot turtle (hence the retarted face).

i did have a shadow under the turtle, i guess i just blurred it WAY too much.

and ill work on the shading a little, thanks!

[MartinBabies]

And clean the lines up, colored sketches doesn't look good.

[undertone]

i might go for a comic like look for the line work, if you know what that means.

[Krimsyn]

i agree with it being a bit blurry but i love the idea

and im glad u posted it when its not done yet
i think more ppl should post unfinished work
i do

[undertone]

i think posting unfinished work not only gets you more motivated to finish the work, but it helps newer memebers learn, in a way.

[Daemon_]

Looking good so far, there is a lot of blurry lines there, and rabies is right about legs, turtles sorta swim across land lol, their legs are flat.

[Maverick]

His eyes remind me alot of the Iron Giant, it gives him that terrifying all of a sudden big turtle kind of look.

Didn't know if the poor turtle had a family and a storyline or a purpose

[randyrandy]

Wow I like it! Just one thing maybe you can add; lines on his 'stomach'..