Gangsta talk

[villian]

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i dont know were to go, when im up in the sky and your down there looking at mid air i wonder if you would ever care, if i paid for your hair with the way you look you need to read a book, so take your time and your time will shine, but what i dont no if what i dont care, and if i ever knew the truth about you, i hate you and light you up like a flaire, so dont you come to me bitching about food, when im only making enough to feed my self, why dont you get a job your a FUCKING hoe, go work the streets for once instead of slutin around down town look for the next trix to pull with the neighborhood dog.

so dont go fuck with me and i wont go fuckin with you, but girl you really need to get a job instead of lettin me support you with the way you glow under the sun i almost feel like i have to or else nothing will happen between me and you so fuck it now, i dont give a shit anymore go work the streets you fucking whore, let some old guy give you a penny, just as he puts it in ur back door u fucking whore!

lolz sorry if its a bit harsh but thats what i came up with lolz

[Samuel]

I like it. But in songs, they usally ryhme. It allows for the song to smooth out. Id say dont call it a song. Call more of a short message or something. I like it alot tho, very good concept.

[ilovecoheed]

well...lol...that's awesome! lol

i like all the harsh language lol

[villian]

thanks

[MartinBabies]

Originally posted by bigfatguy6969@15 Hours Ago
I like it. But in songs, they usally ryhme. It allows for the song to smooth out. Id say dont call it a song. Call more of a short message or something. I like it alot tho, very good concept.

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What songs do you listen to? :blink:
Song lyrics don't have to rhyme at all. Actually, I like it when they don't. It's pretty often only some lines rhyme, more usually than the whole song.

[Samuel]

Well,i didnt mean the whole song -_-

I was refering to rap to... its usally rhymes.