Genocide

[Samuel]

Genocide

The people are dying.

The bodies are flying.


They look around, and see a puddle made from the blood that was bled.

Bodies in sight, they call for the med.


Gunfire is heard in the distance.

Citizens are dead in just an instant.


The tutsi’s hid in cathedrals, hotels, and houses.

The hutu’s army fought not leaving alive a single mouse.


Just upon the entrance of the UN,

We have already lost too many men.

People are crying.

People are dieing.

[ROTD]

nice job but if u want it to ryhme or flow ... which it seemed like you did... i dunno work on this part





They look around, and see the pond full of red.

Bodies in sight, they call for the meds.





doesnt sound right but overall nice effort man

[Samuel]

Changed it too

They look around, and see a puddle made from the blood that was bled.

Bodies in sight, they call for the med.


Thanks mate.

[ilovecoheed]

Gj bfg i like it, has a nice flow to it.

[PlatinumKittyKat]

i like what you did with this part


They look around, and see a puddle made from the blood that was bled.

Bodies in sight, they call for the med


This is a powerful piece, i like when people shine light on the things most poeple dont usually like to talk about. I really like this... good work BFG

[Samuel]

Thanks alot PKK. Im glad people like it.