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[PlatinumKittyKat]

This is my most recent poem. I actually just wrote it a few months ago. I think it needs some work, but I liek it as it is for now.

I feel your hate
Its burning me
Like UV Rays
On a mid summer day
In oh so beautiful F.L.A.
I pray for relief from the heat.
And all I recieve is a chill from your cold heart.
When and how did this all start?
And more importantly... when will it end?
Lend me your ear and your heart, please let me in again.
I need to feel your love, I need to be your friend again.
We're not enemies we're allies remember?
You held my hand while I had your son,
Through him our bonds forever.
It was all love when we created life.
And we need love so we can make this right.
Please dont give up on love.

[Samuel]

I see more then just some random feelings. =(

I feel terrible for what you are growing through. Great poem, true feelings make the best ones.

[PlatinumKittyKat]

thank you so much BFG. true feelings do make the best ones, i agree.

[Deadloader]

-tear- ....real :mellow: very nice i sent this link to someone i know to explain how i feel (not completely how i feel but some of it) it's ok right? i never said it was my work though i mentioned you did it

[PlatinumKittyKat]

Awww, yeah of course its ok. =) Im honored LoL.