Half Empty Cast WIP

[undertone]

still trying to build up a style for my comic im planning on. 3 characters, the one on the left is a basic cartoonization of me, mostly my hair. the dude in the middle is actually no one, but looks a little to psycotic for my liking, and the turtle on the far right is the happy turtle from before, no longer 24feet tall. i kind of like how the eyes are on the side, looks even funnier. going to work on the mouth, wasnt too happy with that.

any way, comments, suggestions?

[ilovecoheed]

gw man, is it guna be an online comic?

[undertone]

yeah, right now im just mostly waiting on a host, because my friend still hasent gotten me an FPT to his server, so i wont be using that unless i get one.

also waiting for my friend to get back from his cottage, hes going to be helping me with ideas.

and thanks, any suggestions, comments?

oh, and bty, i dicided i hate the middle guy, going to re-draw.

[Daemon_]

OMFG its a turtle in a suit! What is there not to like about it? Love the xbox designed hands. Your colouring owns btw, keep it up.

[undertone]

hmmm a suit, good idea lol.

thanks man, any suggestions?

[kickmyflip]

i have always wanted to do an online comic, i attempted it once... but it was very time consumptious.

you are gonna need another character, like a female character that the guy is in love with or something and make it to where he is dumbfounded by this girl and always messes up things for himself. and the girl his totally in love with him, too. but she is waiting for him to make the right move. i dont know. experiment.

[Daemon_]

Put him in a tuxedo, and he'll be the most popular eligable bachelor.

[Deadloader]

ooo stop it cc you're making me horny for the tortoise ( :lol: )

love it ahhhhh tortoise i love it more :P keep it up and i can't wait to see your comis when it goes up

[undertone]

Originally posted by kickmyflip@9 Hours Ago
i have always wanted to do an online comic, i attempted it once... but it was very time consumptious.

you are gonna need another character, like a female character that the guy is in love with or something and make it to where he is dumbfounded by this girl and always messes up things for himself. and the girl his totally in love with him, too. but she is waiting for him to make the right move. i dont know. experiment.

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see the thing is with that, is that is so insanly steriotipical of a few other webcomics running around the net. mainly megatokyo, and questionable content to a point. ill probably add a female character later, but for now i think ill stick to the turtle and the dude with long hair

[Deadloader]

kickmyflip i think you have a strange idea of how stories go... how&#39;s that interesting? it follows on through ctrl alt del and most other online comics <_< i hate followers :mellow: