"final journey"

[rocket2234]

I'm on a journey, far away from home
No one to save me, I'm all alone
Creeping inside me, the spirits within
The fear of all regret, it's sinking in

Hold me now, I'm standing on the edge
Waiting for that moment, for that sweet revenge
Leave me alone, I don't want to show my face
Leave me alone, I'm only a big disgrace

I come across a path, a fork in the road
Go to the right, as I'm told
I come across a man, who says to me
You've gone the wrong way, have you come to rescue me?
I say leave me alone, I'm not good enought for anything anymore

Hold me now, I'm standing on the edge
Waiting for that moment, for that sweet revenge
Leave me alone, I don't want to show my face
Leave me alone, I'm only a big disgrace

Just started running, running from the past
Rid me of the scars, that only last
Been thinking some time, of how my life would end
Been thinking some time, if only I had friends

Hold me now, I'm standing on the edge
Waiting for that moment, for that sweet revenge
Leave me alone, I don't want to show my face
Leave me alone, I'm only a big disgrace

Just leave me alone, I don't want to be seen
Just leave me alone, please don't rescue me
Just leave me alone, I've reached the end
Just leave me alone, a message don't send

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Comments and criticism is welcome.

[ilovecoheed]

is this a song? kinda seems like it because you have a kinda verse and a chorus part that repeats. Gj tho...imo i didn't like how you repeated some of the words tho...but it's good

[rocket2234]

Yes, it is a song. A lot of choruses repeat like that though just so you know.

Any other comments?