New Sig

http://www.imghst.com/uploads/redsfan75/Guardian.jpg

The render and background is decent, but the text kills the whole thing.

Try to avoid stroking the text with 2px and up @ 100% opac, or at least have it 1px and lower the opacity by half or near that.

Try putting the text towards the top left, opposite where it's sitting at right now.

Also, try always to avoid overlapping your text over the render, seeing your other sigs I see you do it in each one, some barely noticeable, but you get the idea.

GJ with the render and bg man, maybe see if you can put more detail into the render rather than the background.

Yeah... the Text has always been my downfall....

Thanks for the input, I'll see what I can do with those suggestions.

This any better?

http://www.imghst.com/uploads/redsfan75/Guardian1.jpg