yuna by starcraft

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/9...abystar6aj.jpg

i would say this is my best yet ?

Looks good i can see places on the right sholder that still need blended but still looks good. I like your 2 current better though.

i like that alot i jus cant read the text that well

yeah the font needs work.. i dunno if i like the style its in... anyway the overall text is avarage and still needs work... i think you should try cutting out parts of the render wiht lasso tool to get smoother edges... anyway g/j but you still have pleanty of room for improvement

if u look at it now its alot better :)

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/9...nafinal2pn.jpg

i like the first one more then your new one.
the colors where nicer on your first. the stock is much beter on the second though. Also good move of blending in the lines at the bodem and the top

The hair and the right shoulder could use some work but thats just me. Also mayabe add a back shadow, it would give the sig more depth.

yeah on the text ?

If you were not to have so much black around the render and give the render a shadow it would look better imo.

im not sure if i could do that with the amount of times the renders been blurred etc to make it look the way it does but i will have a go at it