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I have been working on this for about an hour or two and am going to call it a night. Going to do some more stuff to it later. Comments and suggestions plz.
http://pix7.com/0805/11359v_aika.jpg
OK here is the near finished piece. (I say near finished cus it can still use some work). If someone could actually comment on it it would be nice.
http://pix7.com/0805/11441b_aika.jpg
cant say i like the render, doesnt fit with the rest of the bg. you could try desaturating it a little, that might work. text looks alright, cant say i can think of anything to improve it. also, maybe a border? borders help.
keep working at it.
The colors of the render don't really fit with the background. The background is ok, nothing special. Text looks nice, and I agree with undertone..maybe add a border. Your current looks better imo.
